Discussion: two women? 

Here is a scenario. 

You recently met a girl and you are actually in a relationship. Let’s say her name is Melisa. So one day your girlfriends finds out that you have been seeing Mel and she doesn’t say anything and you don’t know that she knows about Mel. Then one day you are from work, or something, exhausted and all you need is your gf besides you, watching tv and just chilling basically. Then you go into your bedroom and find Mel and your girlfriend having sex. 

This is a real scenario, don’t think of it from a really sexual mindset, this is your wife and your sidechick having sex. 

What would you do? 

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Discussion: virgins 

So like I have said before, when thinking of what pleases men, we think it’s playing with their bodies let them inside us and then they are pleased but due to my understanding; men are just as complicated as women are. That’s why I am starting this series of discussions so that I can understand more and also help others. I also demand brutal honesty, in this and also respect. Also if you do not agree with someone’s opinion, do remember -it’s their opinion and be respectful even if you feel like commenting on it.

 I have been contacted by some virgins both male and female, both of their worries are that women and men avoid them due to no experience. In my culture if a woman is a virgin a man normally treasures her as it shows that she respects herself but that said; it doesn’t mean every man could look at a virgin in this way. Also in my culture women always crave a much older and experienced man as they are said to be more profound and caring. In fact; my grandma taught/told me, I would experience more with an older man and they will care for me and respect me more. I can’t say I know or I have experienced such with a man because I have not been with a man older than me. 

So the question for this week’s discussion is: 

Do men like virgins? And what is their opinion about them? Please be brutally honest because this discussion will be useless if people aren’t honest. After all you are free to voice your opinions. 

Love or career? 

Sometimes you have to sacrifice one thing to get the other. Career or love? 

Which one would you choose? 

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Flash fiction: a burning desire.

Summer had just passed and the seasons were changing. Mostly it had been heavily rainy and gloomy in England  but on that Monday it wasn’t. And everyday when he walked by her house, he’d never seen her there. Hence on that sunny morning he couldn’t move away from that window. Across the street he was, the image and the beauty and the sublimity of her surpassed the rails of the black window blinders and hastily hit against his heart and branded her name to his latent desires. 

She wore a red summer dress and he could hear the soft and both erotic sound of Lana Del Rey’s burning desire. He had once asked her who her favourite singer was and she told him it was Lana Del Rey. With how prepossessed he was with her, he began listening to Lana and he would be lying if he said he didn’t like her music. Hence, what was more alluring was how he imagined her dancing to the soft blues from Lana’s music, so when he heard the song play and saw her by the window he only hopped for his dream to come true. 

The sun shined brighter on her face as he saw her move with the melody, her hips were swaying and moving so slow and romantic. The red dress was even brighter as it flew with her while she swung her hips to the left and to the right. Her skin was shining bright as though it was glazed with molten gold, her grey eyes sparkled as though they were an expensive silver. 

He watched and forgot the time and place. As Lana Del Rey’s angelic voice sang ‘I have a burning desire for you baby’ she closed her eyes, savoured the moment while biting on her lip, her hands were cupping her tits and squeezing them while her body swayed to the sound of the song. He felt his cock become hard and suffocated within the tight pants. Her red dress wasn’t even helping to cease this bad desire, in fact; it made him want to strip her off it. 

He had never seen her dance and damn was her dance one worth watching even. When the lyrics went ‘I have to touch myself to pretend you’re here’ her hand caressed from her chest slowly travelling down to her pussy. She stretched her neck back and continued swaying her hips but with the way her hand was moving he was aware she wasn’t only dancing this time. She was pleasuring herself. And with that, his whole body was burning with a burning desire. 

The song went on and she continued dancing in circles while moving her body ever so sexy and so gently. Her other hand reached up to her other boob and played with it over the red dress. The song went towards the end but she hadn’t finished yet and he wasn’t ready for her to stop yet. Mostly he wished he was there watching her right close.

But this was good enough.  So as the song went on, he saw her bring her hand from her pussy and putting it in her mouth while her body still moved. She sucked on her fingers and licked them savoured her taste. He was keen, he was eager to enjoy her sweet pussy and he was eager to make good love to her while that very same song played. But she was his student and he was her teacher. Her body was something that didn’t stray off his mind and he knew she would always be a fantasy.

That was the sadness he wished he could sort out. What would a teacher who had fallen in love with his student do to have her in his arms? 

Another flash fic story. Every time I read Davey’s work I become inspired to try on a flash fic story. They aren’t my strongest in writing but I think if I continue to read more I will be better. 

Thanks for reading 


Born in a small cup

 Cluster Phobic and suffocating 

Weed and smoke bloated 

Floating in clouds of scents and fantasies


Born in a dry empty pot 

Raised on fire

 Day light shines, 


A tear fell

A smile brightened

 I savoured the pain.

A longing so deep, 

it screamed me to search 

Find me. 

Along the journey I opened my eyes. 

Born in rusted teaspoon,

Laid on sunken beds 

Fucked on broken ceilings 

Screamed in silence 

It was a long journey 

I fell into a long haze 

When I opened my eyes I was in your arms, 

Curled in pearls

Bathed in diamond 

Oiled in gold.

Warm and protected, 

And in your eyes I found myself.

Fifty shades Darker

Hey guys, so the movie trailer is out and a lot of people have been asking me what do I think. I am thinking I am going to watch it because fifty shades was actually the first erotic book that I read. I enjoyed it but as k went on reading other one. I realised it wasn’t all that. Hey I am not bashing it, I like that book; I just don’t really enjoy it as much as I did the first time. 

Then I watched the film and I was literally like ‘what the honest fuck is this?!’ Casting was shit, the plot was shit, the script it was like they were being cut every second each of them spoke, some lines were just off and it didn’t have that flow. I went to cinemas to watch it, I fell asleep. I was as bored as Fuck. 
And no offence to Jamie Donan’s fans but that’s not my Christian Grey. Like an aspiring director if I were to recast that film, my Christian grey would be Chris Hemsworth  

This face 
And this body is just… Christian Grey’s picture in my mind. 

Then as for Anastasia, I would say Kristen Stewart. Never mind the fact that the book is a twilight fan fic, Kristen with her stammering and her awkwardness would do the best Anastasia, 

Then it’s Anastasia’s friend (I forget her name all the time) that girl they cast in the film was an absolute no no. I mean as an aspiring actress myself, I would have nailed that part super good! But if I were to cast someone, despite the age; I would go for Leighton Meester. 

With that gossip girl attitude, she would nail that part. 
Then it’s that male friend, (I also forget him) who is the photographer or shit like that. I don’t know who that actor is, but that part wasn’t right for them, it just didn’t suit them at all, in my opinion it was like putting Ed Sheran to play HarryStyles. You get the memo, so  if I were to recast it, it would be Robert Sheehan. 

Then I think, it would have appealed to me. But unfortunately I wasn’t the director or anything to that film. 
The other question I was asked was: 

If I were to re-write it, would I add more sex scenes or add more content? 

If I would re write that book I would nail it to the ground. I know English isn’t my first language but you should look at every plot like fucking. Give it some highs and ups, some mystery and excitement, change positions and twist it here and there, calm it down a bit then accelerate it a bit; then at last, you put some fire, ecstasy, an orgasmic ending, shock your audience leave them thinking ‘what the fuck just happened?’. That’s how I would write it. And mostly I would do my research! I don’t think a virgin can just become a submissive just like that. They have to learn just like everything else. 

3: what about the story line, what’s my opinion on it? 

Well, the storyline is just cliché. We are used to the Boss and the new girl or the Hot guy and the shy girl shit. But with fifty shades, I would find better mystery than the one in the book. I would give it a base and a storyline that won’t need the eroticism to sell it. For instance if I tell you a short cut of my erotic novel, ‘

When Sebastian meets Penelope for the first time he is instantly attracted to her. Which leads  to him cheating on his wife. Hence  more, his affair leads to him finding out Penelope is on revenge lane. She  is hell-bent to kill Sebastian’s wife. With that Sebastian finds out Lilian isn’t exactly the woman he married. She was recruited to Mary him, and now that it’s five years, she is starting to bankrupt  him. At the same time, for all five years Lilian was in a relationship with two women, she is a lesbian. Having have had his car shop bombed, his hotel bombed, money missing in his business accounts, and the worst part witnessing Lilian admitting to all that to be her fault, Sebastian’s kills her mother, brutally kill her father, and her girl friend. How is Sebastian a man who is angry he has lived a choreograghed life for all five years and an ex professional killer with an addiction to kill- going to deal with someone who has played him for five years and also someone that he still loves, while he is still having sex with Penelope?”

See, you hear little about the sex but more of the drams. Fifty shades lack a nice storyline, it’s just BDSM driven. So I would write a smashing one. (My imagination is always brutal and dramatic and mysterious). 
Would I keep the sex relationship BDSM or just romantic? 

Considering the book’s selling point is BDSM, I would have to keep it like that. But, if the book was mine I wouldn’t write  a BDSM relationship because I don’t know anything about. I would write an absolute lie. What I know is, there is a Dom and Sub. The ins and the outs and the process and the dark side and all about it, it’s really unbeknownst to me. So I wouldn’t write it.